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Friends by ~MusicFaerie1919:iconMusicFaerie1919:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed


Friends
I love them and I hate them,
I need them but yet sometimes I want them far away.
I hurt their feelings sometimes but expect them not to hurt mine.
I wish they would be this or that but I love them they way they are.

They are funny and loud,
They are quiet and reserved.
They are obnoxious and immature,
They are clingy and needy.

They are sometimes rude,
They are sometimes mean.
They don’t always understand me,
They don’t always listen.

Some secretly hate me,
Some secretly can’t live without me.
Some don’t really care,
Some don’t know what to say.

I love them all the same though.
I most definitely need them too.
But I just don’t know if they need me…
©2006-2009 ~MusicFaerie1919
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Author's Comments

This is one of the poems i don't like as much but its still good. I wrote it when there was a lot of drama goin on with me and my friends. But don't worry i only feel like this sometimes. I hope you guys like it.

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~S0-Fresh Mar 4, 2006, 11:29:22 PM
aww it dosent rhyme :(

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~Wolfhanyou Mar 4, 2006, 11:42:54 PM
Shows how many different sides our little friendship group has. Makes you think really, especially if you're in that ring of friends. :] Nice job, Andrea. And just to let you know, you are needed. It's not our little group of friends without the tall, brown-haired, witty almost to be 14 year old teenager. xD

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~MusicFaerie1919 Mar 5, 2006, 12:47:46 AM
yes, well i was aiming for the toughts and feelings, not rhymes. But if you read some of my other stuff they rhyme.

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~MusicFaerie1919 Mar 5, 2006, 12:49:01 AM
Thanks maggie. yeah it does make you think. Any-hoo. luvs ya!! i'm almost fourteen, hahaha!!!

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Kicking it old school. Meep for Sheep.
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~S0-Fresh Mar 5, 2006, 1:51:33 AM
:XD: that was more of a joke


it's a nice piece , well done :nod:

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~MusicFaerie1919 Mar 6, 2006, 4:37:21 PM
oh. hehe! ^^ thanks though!

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Kicking it old school. Meep for Sheep.
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~Rachel-03 Apr 24, 2008, 5:12:03 PM
i love it. it is true, to me.
i feel the same way towards my friends..
you're not the only one..
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~Lou-Lou8593 Jun 29, 2008, 9:38:46 AM
So true, I know which parts to put my friends in :lol:

I like how it's short! :aww: It describes lots although it's like four verses! :giggle:

:+fav:

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"Never Doubt That A Small Group Of Committed People Can Change The World. Indeed, It Is The Only Thing That Ever Has." - Magaret Mead
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~MusicFaerie1919 Jul 8, 2008, 3:14:00 PM
Thanks a bunch! It still surprises my how I wrote this one so long ago and people are still reading it and really enjoying it. =D

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